I was leaving the club when
I saw it. Not that I knew exactly what I was looking at immediately, or what
was happening -but it happened suddenly.
There were two of them,
talking loudly, laughing. I was about to go in the other direction when I
realized there was a third person: a woman. They were watching her, following
her, I think.
Anyway before I knew it,
they grabbed her; pushed her against a car and started smacking her, silencing
her screams. I was frozen; I didn’t know what to do. So I just stood there and
watched this all go down in front of me.
They shoved her in the
backseat, I think I saw a gun or something, I’m not sure. It wasn’t until they
got in the car that I felt brave enough to step further. I don’t know what I
thought I could do, but I still didn’t try to find help -I needed to see what
happened next.
But as I stepped forward, I
realized I had made a mistake. Not because I thought I would be recognized, but
because I recognized one of them.
Call me spoiled, but I expected more from the ending. Like she came from watching BECAUSE it was her brother...or something jarring along those lines.
ReplyDeleteGood job Cre. Keep up the good work.
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